Wednesday, February 24, 2016

Nature Poetry

During the time in the nature
Earth was muddy
Snow was brittle
On the side of river
Locate fallen trees
And garbage was scattered
The sky was painted grey

Every creature was too silent to tell the future

4 comments:

  1. he brittle snow was a nice sensory detail. I like how you talk about the sky being painted gray as opposed to just being gray.

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  2. he brittle snow was a nice sensory detail. I like how you talk about the sky being painted gray as opposed to just being gray.

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  3. This really painted a picture of nature for me. Very descriptive!

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  4. The snow was brittle is my favorite line, something about the word brittle makes me feel amazing

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